Thursday, May 29, 2008

Excerpt From Noel's Story

“Noel? Are you there?” The person on the screen said.

Noel watched the screen carefully, knowing that the man couldn’t hear or see her. She wasn’t to answer at all.

“Noel? Please, just answer me! Where are you?” The man wandered around, looking for the camera. He fell into a nearby pond. Noel was fighting not to answer the man’s call.

Noel’s captain came up and grabbed her shoulder as she was getting up to push the answer button. “Best not do that, or I’ll have to put you in his place.”

“But captain, he’s suffering! Can’t you see that?” Noel pointed at the screen. “You started hunting this guy weeks ago, and you’ve left him for dead once you found out that he was innocent!”

The captain said nothing.

Noel turned toward the screen again and saw that it had gone blank. But she could still hear the man’s voice.

“Noel, please just answer. I hear something coming. Please…” The voice trailed off when Noel heard a scream, followed by a chomping sound. She buried her face in her sleeve, trying to get the sound out of her head.

Her best friend, Amilliano, a grenloch, placed his hand on her shoulder. “Noel, he was trying to outrun the law. That’s illegal, and a sign that he did something really bad. Don’t worry, I think he was fated to die.”

“He was innocent of the crime we were convicting him for, though. He didn’t kill anyone!” She answered back.

9 comments:

Herbert said...

Wow there thats some good posting, your makin an old man sweat. ohhhhhhhhhh!

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Anonymous said...

Bitch dont u ever talk to my friends like that again! You have no right to call my friend pregnate
and you need to move ur big ass away from that door mkay?
They told me wut happend
CUNT.

Anonymous said...

fuck you!

Anonymous said...

fuck you

Anonymous said...

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Sae Kashiwagi said...

hey, i'm sorry i said that, ok? i apologized for it. besides, i was in a bad mood anyway. again i'm sorry. but you guys have no right to slander my name on my own blog. i know who you are. and we sit there everyday, and no one has a problem with it but you guys. what's up with that? Suuuuu!

Herbert said...

What's happenin there? you are all not talkin nice to each other. Can I help?

Anonymous said...

Okay, all of you losers need to get a life. I don't give a shit what any of your bitch friends say. She LOOKs pregnant, she probably IS PREGNANT, and you have no fucking right to talk to my friend like that.