You left me and shut off the light.
Now I am in darkness.
My face is stung by the cold feelings you left behind.
The loving things you have said to me you have taken with you.
Will you ever come back?
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5 comments:
wow jessy.
this is great.
you really are talented when it comes to writing.
great discription.
Jessy,
i can tell you put a lot of thought into this poem.
it is really good because it is meaningful.
Good Job,
Emma
I like it BECAUSE it is freaking intense.I could probably sit for a day, dehydrated, hungry, a wild beard and a bloody welt on my head from hitting myself with an iron rod and not even come up with one line *inhale*. exellent poem.
this is very good
You wrote a very interesting poem, I like it because you were very discriptive of the way the person in the poem feels. You did a good job.
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